Storyboard new idea

So, the storyboard for my new idea, which I am definitely way more pleased with is this:

(0-2 second) A bus will drive into view and then stop at a bus stop for the character to get on

(2-3 seconds) The feet of the character are shown walking onto the bus.

(3-4 seconds) The character gets the bus ticket from the machine

(4-6 seconds) The character walks towards the chair and sits down

(7-8 seconds) character notices there's a button on the back of the chair

(8-9 seconds) zooms up to the button

(9-10 seconds) character presses the button, that is labelled 'DO NOT PRESS'

(10-12 seconds) characters facial expressions change from happy to shocked, to worried to amazed.

(12-20 seconds) the bus shakes and begins to change and go underground

(20-30 seconds) this last ten seconds of the animation will consist of the bus going underwater. Then a few events that take place underwater such as fish swimming by, and image of the outside of the bus moving around. Closing with a shot of the characters face looking outside in amazement.